Where Did January Go? (A reflection on the end of the beginning….in fiction)

the-end-2-1327659-mJanuary 31st seems like a good day to reflect on those moments in fiction that constitute the end of the beginning….

For me, the best fiction is that which throws, early on, a protagonist that we know something (but not too crazy much) about into a crisis. That’s the beginning that eventually must end: the big turning point AS a turning point, as something new and different. The beginning is a crisis situation (or at least, a situation that constitutes a substantial change from what was before) as a crisis rather than a “new normal.”

The end of the beginning is usually a crucial part of the rising action in fiction. It’s that moment when a character rises to the challenge the crisis represents or accepts the changes that have occurred, and from there, can go about becoming master of his or her life.

You can mark “the end of the beginning” in a few ways:

  • There is a change of tone and perhaps of pace. Things settle down. They feel a bit calmer, maybe even slower.
  • Characters’ actions shift from being reactive and responsive (to the crisis or change) to being proactive (taking steps to get ahead or to initiate a new pattern of change). This doesn’t happen all at once; it might be a gradual shift, as some actions may still be reactive. But that change to proactivity happens. And it starts to be noticeable.
  • It’s a great moment for an epiphany or revelation… For a determination to better oneself, or act differently, or to consciously make adjustments.


“Les Miserables” is my favorite book of all time, so of course, I have to use it here 🙂

The opening of the book gives you background on the Bishop of D—, to set the reader up to understand who he is as he interacts with Jean Valjean. I’ve always found it interesting that that interaction, so pivotal in Valjean’s life, the spark that ignites a desire for love and salvation in his existence, can be seen (for the bishop) to be just a normal day, one work of mercy and love among many.

We learn that Valjean has been released from jail on parole. The only person who will give him a place to stay is the Bishop of D—. Valjean steals the bishop’s silver and flees, but is caught. Then….

The bishop tells the police he gave the silver to Valjean. He tells Valjean that he forgot the candlesticks, and gives him a pair of silver candlesticks as well. The police let him go, and the bishop tells him to “use this silver to become an honest man.” He says he has bought Valjean’s soul for God.

Valjean has a couple of crises: his newfound freedom, his arrest, the bishop’s pardon. And he needs a while to understand what he is called to, what his life can become. He robs a boy on the road before…. at the end of the beginning…. he breaks down in tears and repentance and determines he will change his life. That he will not steal again.


Don Quixote leaves home determined to be a knight…. in an era where knights are no more. He is excited, until he remembers, “I haven’t been knighted. I need someone to knight me before I can use arms and practice chivalry.”

So, after a series of hijinx he gets an innkeeper, the “steward of a castle,” to knight him. Once knighted, Don Quixote’s purpose changes: he no longer has to worry about becoming knighted. He longer has to respond to that situation of being unable to act as a knight would. He can now chart his own course and go where he will, living the code of chivalry as he sees fit. And that is exactly what he does, determining to return home to get money and necessities (and to procure his neighbor Sancho as his squire) before setting off.

In this case, Don Quixote does not accept or adapt to the crisis. He solves it. He solves it becoming knighted. That is another way to “end” the beginning, and that is why I call his situation “change” rather than “crisis.” The crisis ends. After the “beginning,” it no longer exists.


You can have various “beginnings” with their “ends” throughout a novel: especially a long and complex one such as “Gone with the Wind.”

In some way, each new crisis or setback characters face is a new beginning that, at some point, needs its “end.” The burning of Atlanta in the middle of “Gone with the Wind” is such a crisis. It changes everything about the life Scarlett knew. And she finds her “end” to this new beginning when, after reacting to the situation by fleeing Atlanta with Melanie and the baby, by returning home, and by doing what she can to establish what basic stability she can, she determines (famously) that “With God as my witness, I will never go hungry again.”

That end of the beginning is pivotal for her character. It hardens her. It is a moment of taking charge of her life with a stated aim that determines all her future actions in the book.

So, what are your thoughts on this? Do your characters have ends to their beginnings? Do you have an example from a favorite book, or a moment in film that constitutes such an end, an adjustment to and an acceptance of circumstance that shifts a character from REACTING to ACTING AS HIS OR HER OWN PERSON?


9 responses to “Where Did January Go? (A reflection on the end of the beginning….in fiction)

  1. This has me thinking of Ender’s Game where every victory seems to open up a new challenge. There’s a part where Ender is playing a video game that changes as the player continues. He gets beyond the programming at one point, so stranger challenges appear. I need to read the book again, but I don’t think there was a way to actually ‘beat’ the game.

    Something I’m outlining now is a series that has multiple beginnings and endings. Each adventure has 4 acts with each one finishing on the revelation of a new step or direction. For example, the end of one act might be the destruction of the hero’s hometown and this makes him a wanderer. Then another act finishes with him finding a new home to defend. Life tends to have tons of beginnings and endings, so I like writing something that shows this.

    • You’re so right! life is full of change: of new beginnings and endings that open up new opportunities and challenges. I think that’s why the fiction that reads most true reflects this! Like your idea for that four act series a lot!!! It sounds really interesting and all the stopping points you mention will provide some degree of closure (for each book being a story) while still leaving something open and providing a hook for readers to continue on.

      • Thanks. The real trick is having some kind of overarching theme that is subtle enough to not disrupt the ending of each book, but can still be noticed by keen eyes. Also choosing characters to carry over or show up again. The whole thing was inspired by the Final Fantasy games of old where you had multiple discs to play through.

  2. Perhaps when Jane Eyre is confronted with the existence of Mr. Rochester’s wife, it is a turning point in her character. Until that time, while Jane liked to consider herself independent, she was quite needy in terms of love and desire for acceptance. Once she’d tasted love, desire and affirmation, the giver of those emotions became her entire world. When she becomes aware that Rochester is not all that he seems, she has a crisis of the soul – and after a terrible few hours, decides she must love herself more than be loved by someone else. She leaves the one individual who, up to that point in her life, had offered her love (albeit selfish love), and steals away in the dead of night to become her own person. She developed some steel in her character.

    You always have the most interesting topics for your blog!

    • I’m glad you liked this one! And I LOVE this example! Wow, Jane Eyre is a great moment there. And it’s a good moment of a new “beginning” that ends in the middle of the story, rather than the end of the story’s opening. 🙂

  3. My novel is structured in a weird way where there are five beginnings and ends, basically multiple starts and ends, multiple climaxes and resolutions. A bit similar to what Charles Yallowitz described. I too didn’t want to write the usual beginning, middle, end kind of story. I’m hoping I can find agents who like it. Thanks for the list of ways to mark the end of the beginning. Helpful list!

    • I love stories that play with linear story structure in some form or fashion. It is artsy, it is fun, and it can bring readers to make connections between events separated temporally that otherwise they might not have! 🙂 Glad you liked the post!

  4. As in real life, we have many beginnings and endings. Each “story” dictates who we are. If we are to observe growth in the characters we’ve developed, the same principle should apply in fiction Great post, as always!

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